Yay! You got it in, just in time. Excellence!

Yes, I absolutely love the metaphor of sex as food. So many references to hunger in VS and Letting Go, and the oral fixation, sucking her fingers and so on. The very first thing RayV tries to do for Fraser socially is feed him.

But the definition of anorexia is interesting. We know, from the 'glut' that Fraser is really a very sexual being, so his buttoned back 'normal' persona is obviously the act. What does he need to act for, that becomes the question.

Well done! (And I haven't attempted tanka in years... could be over a decade by now. I'm impressed how smooth and effortless you make it appear... I know how much effort that takes.)