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Hamlet: Fanfic: Unwritten

  • Jan. 20th, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Title: Unwritten
Fandom: Hamlet
Rating: PG
Length: ~350 words
Content notes: Horatio, afterwards.
Author notes: n/a
Summary: Horatio, at the moment when his friend's story becomes history.



History is always written by the winners; or, more accurately, by the winners’ scribes, by those left alive after the battles have been fought.

The prince’s death, that last, desparate brush of lips, is still raw and fresh within Horatio when Fortinbras sends him to clear Hamlet’s rooms.

It’s not like Horatio hasn’t been here before – in this room, in this bed – but it’s different now. He's walked into what remains of the life of Hamlet, Prince of Denmark, and it’s up to Horatio which parts of it make it to the history books.

It's silent here now, and cold. The fire went out some time ago and no one has replenished it. Horatio wraps his coat tighter around himself and lights a candle.

It's not a job he wishes on anyone, but it's the least he can do for Hamlet, now that it's too late for anything else. He doesn't plan on staying here tonight, but he wants to at least make a start; survey the territory, as it were.

He sets the candle down near a corner of Hamlet's desk and sighs as he sits down in front of it.

Hamlet has never been one to keep anything in order, in his head or outside of it, and so his desk is buried under a mountain of paper.

It feels wrong reading Hamlet's letters, a line he would never have crossed during Hamlet's lifetime. They're not personal documents any more, they're a means of constructing Hamlet's story. He's tasked Horatio with this himself, and Horatio considers himself bound in love and duty, but now he is leafing through page after page, he's not sure he can do this.

It's one thing feeling like the ground is forever shifting, and that if you only hold on to him tightly enough, for long enough, it'll stop doing that and things will be certain. It's quite another to find this is how he always was - with Ophelia, with Laertes, with his mother.

He ends up lighting a fire. After all, he is the one writing this story.

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peoriapeoriawhereart: very British officer in sweater (Brigader gets the job done)
[personal profile] peoriapeoriawhereart wrote:
Jan. 20th, 2014 10:34 pm (UTC)
Nice!
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (hamlet - hamlet horatio DT version)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Jan. 20th, 2014 10:38 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
ride_4ever: (My fandom licks things)
[personal profile] ride_4ever wrote:
Jan. 20th, 2014 11:57 pm (UTC)
I felt touched by this.
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (hamlet - hamlet horatio DT version)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2014 12:04 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm glad to hear it!

The ending is probably rushed and not terribly clear; I wish I'd had the time to write one or two of the letters he was reading. I always feel for him at the end, he really wanted to be a martyr for love and instead he's got this impossible task of preserving Hamlet's memory when he's at a point where he'd rather forget, personally.
mrkinch: Hamlet holding Yorick's skull (Hamlet)
[personal profile] mrkinch wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2014 12:42 am (UTC)
Lovely, with a subtle and well-conveyed sense that you are withholding a great deal of additional detail.
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (hamlet - hamlet horatio DT version)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2014 08:45 am (UTC)
Thanks! As I said, I wish I'd had time to add some of that detail and make it a little clearer.

Congratulations on your name tag, and also I love your icon. Jacobi ♥
mrkinch: Hamlet holding Yorick's skull (Hamlet)
[personal profile] mrkinch wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2014 05:20 pm (UTC)
Jacobi's is the one I own.:)

A group of us once held a "Day of the Dane": Olivier, Mel Gibson (oO), R&G are dead, and Branagh. No time for Jacobi, tragically (hee!), but a hell of a day.
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (hamlet - campbell scott ninja)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Jan. 21st, 2014 10:14 pm (UTC)
Whoah, that sounds like one hell of a way to spend a day indeed!

R&GAD is one of my favourite things in life. My favourite Hamlet overall is probably Campbell Scott's (the lovely ninja in my icon).
desireearmfeldt: (Default)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Jan. 22nd, 2014 08:29 pm (UTC)
I like the idea of Horatio as historian, as in history written by...well, in this case, not the victors, so much as the last man standing, but the point being that the last man standing gets control over the story. Whether he wants it or not.
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (hamlet - hamlet horatio DT version)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2014 01:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks! The otherwise rather hysterical profic The Lunatic, the Lover, and the Poet has a nice take on that idea at the end. I just like unreliable narrators and the idea that the story Horatio ends up telling is quite different from what actually happened. Poor boy, he had planned quite a different part for himself in this story, he definitely didn't want this.

Thanks for commenting!

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