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due South: Fic: Coming Back

  • Feb. 18th, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Title: Coming Back
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Fraser/Thatcher
Rating: NC-17
Length: 1300 words
Summary: Meg comes back from an undercover assignment.
Notes: This is a science fiction AU which is sequel to this little epistolary snippet, so read that first. It's also a present for [personal profile] sage. : ) Ratio of spaceship action to porn is about 1:1.

It fits into the challenge because it's undercover work, I suppose, but it also fits in another way: I discovered recently that I almost always write het sex from the female POV, so here's a het sex scene written from the other side.


"You got the codes?" Ray Vecchio said over the comm. He was from the 27th sector AC system police, leading the squad that usually liaised with the Federal Police for smuggling cases.

"Yes," Fraser said, pulling himself hand over hand over to the airlock of the smuggling ship and plugging a stick into the computer outlet.

They waited, tense and ready, for the endless seconds it took before the airlock cycled open. Meg had gotten them the codes, and she would also have disabled the surveillance. Fraser had absolute trust in his partner--she would've found a way to warn them if something had gotten in her way.

They all pulled themselves into the airlock and punched the button for it to close and equalize the pressure. Fraser found himself fretting, going over the plan in his mind. Boardings were always dangerous, and Meg was alone in there, among crew that were little more than pirates.

Ray Kowalski winked at him through the faceplate of his EVA suit, and Fraser blinked, realizing that he'd been frowning. Ray made a thumbs up as Fraser smiled.

Then the airlock opened into the ship's cargo hold, where likely no crew would be at this moment. They fanned out, stun pistols ready, taking cover among the crates that according to Meg's reports were full of endangered Cetian coral plants.

They encountered the first crewman in the corridor directly outside the hold. Elaine Besbriss shot him from behind, and he dropped without a sound, unconscious. The second one saw them first, and had time to raise a cry before they got her.

Meg had been right that security was lax, though. They got to the bridge without any casualties, but that's where they ran out of luck.

"Damn it!" Vecchio muttered, tugging at the door, which was sealed. They could see the bridge crew on the other side, readying their weapons, and oh, Meg was there, and Fraser was sure his face was betraying him. She held her neutral expression, met his gaze for one brief second, then surreptitiously took the gas capsule from her pocket and broke it.

He could see her holding her breath as the gas started acting on the crew, and then while they began to lose their holds on their guns and sink to the floor in confusion, she took an emergency gas mask from her pocket and put it on.

"Watch it!" shouted Besbriss, on rear guard, and they turned to take down the group of crew coming at them from behind.

***

"I need a shower," Meg muttered as they were nearing the end of their vid meeting with Lieutenant Welsh . She glanced at Fraser, and he could read the unspoken with you in her gaze. He twined his foot with hers outside the scope of the camera.

"The ship was taken in our space," Welsh was saying. "So we're taking custody."

"That's fine," Meg said. "But we're taking care of the cargo, and the crew broke intersystem law. So they're ours to prosecute."

Welsh nodded reluctantly. "Right. Well, it was good working with you."

"Same to you."

They signed off, and Meg breathed out an exaggerated sigh of relief. "At last."

Fraser caught her up in a hug, holding her tight, the better to feel that she was actually there with him. "You're back," he whispered into her neck.

"Mmm. I am so glad to be out of there."

He tensed up a little. "Did anything happen? Something you didn't tell me?"

She shook her head. "No, nothing like that. It was just--tension and boredom, you know? You can't ever let go when you're undercover."

He cupped her head, feeling her tense neck muscles, and kissed her. Her mouth opened easily, but she broke the kiss after only a moment, rubbing his shoulder in apology. "I really do need that shower, okay? Just to wash it all off me."

They took it together, sponging each other off with the limited water allowance a small ship like the Maple Leaf had. He shivered when she drew the sponge down his chest, and he saw her glance down at his erection and smile. Fraser pushed her against the wall of the cubicle and kissed her again, and this time they lingered over the kiss, their damp bodies pressing together, Meg's strong arms pulling him close.

They tumbled from the shower to the bed, and Fraser reveled in her weight on him. They'd tried zero-grav sex a couple of times, but it was really rather frustrating when you kept drifting apart.

They kissed, slow and thorough and with no hurry, rocking against each other. This wasn't the rough adrenaline-fueled sex they often had right after seeing action. After the boarding, they'd been caught up in seeing the cargo and crew taken care of, not to mention all the inevitable bureaucracy, and they were tired.

No, this was about finding each other again, and about Meg finding her way back to herself.

Fraser made a soft urgent noise and shifted her weight off him. He didn't want to come yet.

"Let me?" he said, reaching down between her legs.

"Mmm," Meg said, angling her leg up.

He stroked her, softly, carefully, guided by her murmurs, the way her breathing grew shallow. He loved watching her like this, with her eyes falling closed, vulnerable as she never was on duty. And yet they were partners in this, too.

He cupped the curve of her breast with his other hand, leaned down to suck on the nipple, taking his time. She shifted, her hand brushing against his erection just to feel it, pressing lightly against him.

"Kiss me," she murmured, and he turned his attention from her nipple to her mouth.

"Oh," she said into his mouth, and then she was moaning while the kiss grew deeper. She cupped the back of his head to hold him there while he slowed the stroking of his fingers until she tipped over the edge, coming for what seemed a long time, until the slightest movement of a fingertip made her shudder and twitch.

"Mmmm," she said, incoherent, her eyes still closed. He slid one finger into her, just to feel the throbbing aftermath of her orgasm.

"More," she said, and he gave her another finger.

"No, I mean--" and she rolled over, straddled him, took him in. She sank down on him with a satisfied sigh, and Fraser fell back, overwhelmed by sensation. He didn't have much leverage in this position, but he didn't need it--she rocked against him so sweetly, so perfectly. He reached a sort of plateau of pleasure in the slide of his body against hers, each movement equal and repeated, again and again.

Then Meg jolted him out of it, bending forward to mouth at his neck, her teeth digging in. "I love watching you like this," she murmured. She was all around him, her hair brushing his face, her breasts heavy on his chest. He felt the peak approaching, and held her tight, too tight, as he reached his climax deep inside her.

"Sorry," he said afterwards, rubbing at the marks on her hips.

Meg smiled. "I'm not going to break."

She pulled him close, stroked her hand down his back.

"You're back," he murmured. It was half a question.

"I'm back," she confirmed, and he could feel it in the relaxation of her body.

They lay there, listening to the humming of the ship around them, a tiny point of life and warmth in vastness of space, and they let go together, sinking into sleep.

Comments

exbex: (Canada)
[personal profile] exbex wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 05:27 pm (UTC)
I really enjoy the characterizations here. They're very true to the show, but they're letting their vulnerability show enough to really enjoy one another. It makes the erotic elements even more enjoyable.
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 06:23 pm (UTC)
In my head, they have been working as partners for a long time in this AU, and there isn't any rank difference between them, either--I think that explains the lack of the pricklyness and awkwardness that they have in canon. And I'm glad you enjoyed it! : )
seascribble: the view of boba fett's codpiece and smoking blaster from if you were on the ground (Default)
[personal profile] seascribble wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 07:02 pm (UTC)
Oh, I like this take on them. Fraser and Meg and the Rays and Elaine in spaaaaaace is such a great idea. :) And Fraser and Meg are so comfortable and hot together in this AU, I love it.
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 10:16 pm (UTC)
In spaaaace is often a good idea! And yeah, I do enjoy writing them all awkward the way they are in canon, but it was good to write them as comfortable long-term partners, too. Thank you! : )
hazelwho: (ds fraser looks down)
[personal profile] hazelwho wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 07:54 pm (UTC)
This is awesome! I'm so happy to see more the of their adventures in space! =) And the Fraser/Thatcher felt very in-character. I loved them slowly finding their way back to one another.
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 10:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you! This was fun to write, and I didn't really worry a lot about the worldbuilding (unlike the long science fiction AU idea that is brewing in my brain). And I really enjoyed writing them as long-term partners.
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (ds: fraser by slidellra)
[personal profile] sage wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 09:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, WOW! THANK YOU!! I love this so much. It's like all the best moments when they get along in canon -- take the separation of rank out of the way and they have a beautifully well-balanced partnership. I also love that she doesn't instantly regain her equilibrium after coming up from undercover. *pets them* Also! Yay Elaine & the Rays! \o/
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 10:20 pm (UTC)
*beams* I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah, it can be fun to write them all awkward, but I really enjoyed taking away the obstacles and seeing what they could be like as equal partners. And of course I had to bring some teamwork with Elaine and the Rays into it. : )

ETA: Also? Wow, that icon is hot.

Edited 2013-02-19 10:21 pm (UTC)
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (due South - fraser/rayk yeah!)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 10:29 pm (UTC)
I think there's a "smiled" or something that's gone walkies towards the end.

Nitpicks aside, wow! I love the flirtiness at the start (awwww, the bit with his foot)and the way they find each other again after the mission's done. They're so good together in this verse.

Also, het sex scene from the male POV. Not something I run into very often, or seek out. Really interesting, telling it from that side.

...and now I go and find a Thatcher icon.
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 10:26 pm (UTC)
Fixed! : ) That's what I get for not having it beta-read...

And hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! The foot thing made me smile, too.

So do you think het sex from the male POV is more rare in general in fic? I thought it was just me.
mergatrude: a skein, a ball and a swatch of home spun and dyed blue yarn (Fraser - forearms)
[personal profile] mergatrude wrote:
Feb. 18th, 2013 11:51 pm (UTC)
I love this! Fraser and Meg as equals, Rays In Space, Elaine! ♥

(I also love the, "In my head..." reply you made earlier and would love any details you'd care to share with us.)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 10:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥ This was fun to write.

Sadly, I don't have any more details in my head? But I will ponder it and maybe it will spark more fic. : )
jesse_the_k: Slings & Arrows' Anna offers up "Virtual Timbits" (Anna brings doughnuts)
[personal profile] jesse_the_k wrote:
Feb. 19th, 2013 11:39 pm (UTC)
Swashbuckling, then sweet. Also I really really love that nullgrav sex is pretty much a drag.

I think you may be the only writer I follow who writes het fic. It's very dreamy and cozy and magic, as Federal Space Agents should be. I'm wondering if they have Sam Brownes painted on their space suits?
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 20th, 2013 12:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Yeah, I think nullgrav sex would be okay for oral sex and stuff like that, but any thrusting would tend to push you apart, I think. Hmm, the Wikipedia page on sex in space is mostly disappointingly dry, but there are a couple of sexist old science fiction quotes about bobbing breasts in zero gravity and how any red-blooded space commander couldn't ignore them. *facepalm* Apparently someone invented a sort of elastic belt that would help with the drifting apart, though?

I think you may be the only writer I follow who writes het fic.

I like some variety, I think? I actually started writing het (and femslash) as a sort of challenge to myself, because I had difficulty writing sex from a female POV. I mean, I know what it's like to have sex in my own female body, but obviously women overall are pretty different in their response to sex. It felt like I was either writing my own experience or deliberately writing something that wasn't my own experience. I managed to get over that by going deeper into the character's POV, and now I don't have any trouble with it.
mizface: (MotB-pirates)
[personal profile] mizface wrote:
Feb. 20th, 2013 12:11 am (UTC)
Oooh - great story, and lovely follow up to the card. I was hoping to see more of this AU!
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Feb. 20th, 2013 12:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you! : )

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