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FAKE: Fanfic: Quittin’ Time

  • Jun. 16th, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Title: Quittin’ Time
Fandom: FAKE
Author: [livejournal.com profile] badly_knitted
Characters: Dee, Bikky, Ryo
Rating: PG
Setting: After the manga.
Summary: Dee makes a life-changing decision.
Word Count: 447
Warnings: None
Written For: Challenge #86: Health and Fitness.
Disclaimer: I don’t own FAKE, or the characters. They belong to the wonderful Sanami Matoh.




Lighting up a cigarette, Dee leant back with a sigh, breathing out a stream of smoke. Bliss.

“You should give those up, they’re gonna kill ya.”

Opening his eyes, he found Bikky glaring at him.

“What’s it to you, ya little twerp?”

Bikky shrugged.

“Nothin’. Go ahead and kill yourself, I sure as hell wouldn’t be sheddin’ no tears.”

Dee took another drag, determined to enjoy his smoke and ignore the annoying brat. Easier said than done.

“But Ryo would. You made him love you, and you don’t even care enough about him to look after yourself.” Having said his piece, Bikky stomped off to his room, slamming the door behind him and leaving Dee on the sofa, stunned.

That cut deep; maybe the brat had a point. What would it do to Ryo if Dee died young because of his nicotine addiction? He looked at the cigarette in his hand, suddenly disgusted with himself. He knew Ryo didn’t really like the smell, but old habits are hard to break. Then again, he’d never had a good enough reason to quit before. Without even taking one last puff, he crushed the cigarette out in the ashtray. That was it, no more, for Ryo’s sake if not for his own.


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“What’s got you so grumpy?” Ryo asked a few days later, after nearly getting his head bitten off for no reason, yet again.

“Sorry, babe, it’s not you. I quit smoking and it’s driving me nuts.”

Ryo looked surprised.

“You quit? Just like that?”

“Yep! Haven’t had a smoke in four days.”

“That’s fantastic, Dee, I’m proud of you! But what made you quit now?”

“I just got to thinkin’. Smoking shortens lives, and now I have you, I want to be around for a very long time. I should’a quit years ago, but I couldn’t see any point. Now I do.”

“So you’re doing it for me?” Ryo seemed a bit bothered by that.

“No, I’m doing it for us, so we can have as long as possible together. If quitting doesn’t kill me first.”

Smiling, Ryo leant in to kiss his partner.

“First thing tomorrow, I’m getting you some nicotine patches and gum, they’ll help with the cravings. In the meantime, maybe there’s another way to distract you; Bikky’s staying over at Carol’s tonight.”

“We’re all alone? Why didn’t ya say so before? C’mere.” Dee pounced on Ryo, pinning him to the sofa. “Just like old times!”

Yes, Dee told himself as he gazed at the beautiful man in his arms; no matter what cravings he had to suffer through, he could beat the smoking habit.

His addiction to Ryo Maclean was a different matter altogether.

The End

Comments

[identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 16th, 2014 09:39 pm (UTC)
Some addictions you shouldn't even try to break. Good for Dee for making the decision to stop smoking.
bk_forever: (Dee & Ryo)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 16th, 2014 10:21 pm (UTC)
I think he just needed a good reason to quit, and now he's found one. Being addictd to Ryo is a lot heathier!

Thank you!
[identity profile] awieatti.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 17th, 2014 09:41 am (UTC)
Gotta love Bikky for setting Dee on the right path! :D

I've never smoked but I can imagine it's hard to quit once it becomes a habit. Just like giving up sweets (probably even worse than that because of the withdrawal effects). But having a good enough reason to quit can do wonders! :)

And now, Ryo, it's your job to distract Dee as often as you can to help him get through these hard, hard times! ;D
bk_forever: (Dee & Ryo)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 17th, 2014 02:09 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I've never smoked either, but my mum did, all my life until she had a heart sttack. That was her 'good reason',
she's never had another cigarette since, that's over 14 years now.

Dee will make it - the nicotine patches and stuff will help but the most important thing is his desire to kick the habit so that at least one thing isn't likely to kill him young. He wants as much time with Ryo as he can get and if that means giving up his smokes, he thinks it's a fair trade. Ryo is far more important to him.

Thank you!
[identity profile] awieatti.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 17th, 2014 09:22 pm (UTC)
Congrats for quitting! Yeah the easiest (and safest) way is to just not start :D

Ryo will be very proud of him when he makes it! :) And Bikky will finally be satisfied, too. That is, unless he finds another unhealthy habit of Dee's to criticize... Poor Dee xD
bk_forever: (Dee & Ryo)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 17th, 2014 09:55 pm (UTC)
Somehow, I don't think Bikky will ever let up on Dee. Still, as long as Ryo is proud of him, that's all Dee really cares about.

Thank you!
[identity profile] brit-columbia.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 21st, 2014 10:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you, that was fun! You really captured their voices well.
bk_forever: (Dee & Ryo)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 21st, 2014 11:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you think so! I'm still very much a learner when it comes to writing FAKE so it's really a boost to have such an experienced FAKE writer say they sound right. I'm used to writing British characters, so trying to get the FAKE characters to sound American is a challenge in itself.

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