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Title: Winter Winds and Ice
Fandom: The Silmarillion
Rating: T
Length: 200 words
Content notes: Canon character death
Author notes: N/A
Summary: Turgon, Elenwë, Idril, and ice - he had never thought it would end like this.



“Ata! Ata, it’s cold out!” Turgon laughed as he swung Idril through the air.

Elenwë laughed from the doorway to the house as she watched. “You should bring her back in. Just because you and I don’t think it’s cold, doesn’t mean she won’t – she is more used to your city, and not the mountain.”

“But perhaps, darling, this is simply what we need to do to get her used to it? We wouldn’t want her to slip
and fall in the snow,” Turgon said, grinning.

Idril laughed. “But Ata, you’d just have to carry me then!”

“Oh, I would?”

~

“Ata, I want Nana!” Idril cried from her perch on her father’s back. “Why isn’t she coming back? Ata, where is she?”

Turgon shook his head. “Just stay there, darling. It’s safer for you back there. You won’t slip and fall again.”

“Why isn’t Nana here? She said she was going to teach me how to be careful on the ice. I want her, not you!” Idril pounded her fists into her father’s back.

Fingon winced as he watched them, opening his mouth to speak, only to shut it when Turgon shook his head.

“She slipped into the ice, darling.”

Comments

elen_nare: (Default)
[personal profile] elen_nare wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 03:22 pm (UTC)
Really powerful - the contrast between the two halves works so well.
ladybrooke: (Default)
[personal profile] ladybrooke wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 08:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you think it works well. :)
hhimring: Estel, inscription by D. Salo (Default)
[personal profile] hhimring wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 10:17 pm (UTC)
I was a little puzzled by the setting at first--and then I realized that, of course, the first part is set on the slopes of Taniquetil!
How poignant to think that, as a Vanya, Elenwe might actually have been quite an expert on snow and ice...
ladybrooke: (Default)
[personal profile] ladybrooke wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 11:38 pm (UTC)
I'm glad the setting wasn't too hidden! I probably could have made it clearer, but I wanted to do exactly 100 words in both sections...

It was one of those things that I had never thought of before getting a prompt, but once I thought of it, there was suddenly a whole flood of mental images with it. I think I'm going to have to write more about Elenwe being somewhat of an expert on snow and ice.
[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 10:28 pm (UTC)
Lovely.
ladybrooke: (Default)
[personal profile] ladybrooke wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2014 11:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

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