Previous Entry | Next Entry

Hawaii Five-0: Fanfic: Begging For A Miracle

  • Aug. 10th, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Title: Begging For A Miracle
Challenge #55:
Bruise
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Rating: G
Length: 317 words
Summary: Danno was missing.
Author's Note: Written in the second person.

You followed all the clues, turned over every stone, hit up every snitch you and everyone you know have ever had and got absolutely nowhere. Danny was missing and you had no idea where he was, who took him or why. All you knew was that the Camero had been found thirty seven hours ago, with the keys in the ignition and its motor still running; the driver's side door had been left open and there was blood smeared on the seat.

And Danny had vanished.

Finally, finally a call came in from one of Chin and Kono's cousins, something about an abandoned warehouse and some suspicious activity. It was a long shot, the longest of long shots, but when it's the only shot you have you take it and pray for a miracle.

Or even two.

And for once things started to go your way, because not only was the intel good, it was golden. The doors were bolted so you forced your way in and they must have known you were coming because they'd all cleared out and took all their stuff with them, but that doesn't matter because the one thing they left behind was your partner. Except he was just lying there, stiller than you'd ever seen him in your life and he was covered in bruises and there was blood everywhere all you could do was scream, "No!" and pray like there was no tomorrow. Because, without him? There wouldn't be.

Then you were there, with him in your arms and miracle of miracles there was the flutter of a heartbeat under your fingers and you could finally breathe again and you held him tight and maybe, just maybe things were finally going your way and someone up there was looking out for you because you have him back and you knew, just knew you are never going to let him go anywhere ever again.

Comments

[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 10th, 2013 06:22 pm (UTC)
Yay flashfic! And I <3 how you used the second person POV here. The FEEELS!
[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 10th, 2013 07:47 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad the second person POV worked! Glad you liked it!
[identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 11th, 2013 04:12 am (UTC)
This is really lovely!
[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 11th, 2013 04:15 am (UTC)
Thank you!

About

[community profile] fan_flashworks is an all-fandoms multi-media flashworks community. We post a themed challenge every ten days or so; you make any kind of fanwork in response to the challenge and post it here. More detailed guidelines are here.

The community on Livejournal:
[livejournal.com profile] fan_flashworks

Tags

Latest Month

February 2026
S M T W T F S
1234567
891011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios
Designed by [personal profile] chasethestars