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due South : fanfic : Cold Comfort

  • May. 6th, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Challenge 46 : Comfort

Title : Cold Comfort
Fandom : due South
Pairing : Benton Fraser / Victoria Metcalf
Rating : General
Tag : Poetry
Word Count : 78

AN # 1 : Title inspired by the Paul Gross movie of the same name.Text inspired by [livejournal.com profile] bghost's poem "Comfort" in this same challenge.

AN # 2 : Due to formatting difficulties, the first stanza may appear as offset when it SHOULD be quad left, and there may appear a thin blue line which SHOULD NOT be there separating the first and second stanzas.

Summary : Canon-compliant musings on Fraser and Metcalf during the deadly snowstorm in Fortitude Pass.
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Winter embraces
This Northern pair
As they embrace each other;
The snow might hold them there forever --
As forever they might hold each other.

The poetry she embodies
Somehow sustains them
In conjoined life;
The world is curtained off in swirling whiteness –
In whiteness that can either end or start a life.

There is everything warm to lose
And everything cold to win.
He puts her cold fingers in his warm mouth
And lets her coldness enter in.

Comments

[identity profile] bghost.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 6th, 2013 04:38 pm (UTC)
Ooooh, that last verse gave me shivers! And the last line made me jump.
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 6th, 2013 07:32 pm (UTC)
So gratified that mine worked for you as yours worked for me. That one-two punch, our duet, you set 'em up and I knock 'em down.
[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 7th, 2013 04:04 am (UTC)
Oh wow, very evocative.
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 7th, 2013 04:17 am (UTC)
TYK for reading and commenting!
[identity profile] vickitub.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 7th, 2013 08:53 pm (UTC)
chilling
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 7th, 2013 09:00 pm (UTC)
Then the poem "did its job". TYK for reading and commenting!
[identity profile] vickitub.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 7th, 2013 09:12 pm (UTC)
No probs x

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