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Title: Second Verse, Not Quite The Same
Fandoms: due South
Characters: Ray Vecchio, Stella Kowalski
Rating: General
Length: 296
Disclaimer: I didn't create these characters, I don't own them, I derive no profit from their use.
Summary: Ray Vecchio and Stella Kowalski reach an understanding.  [also fills prompt at ds-snippets]


By the end of his third date with Stella Kowalski, Ray’s wondering if it’s too soon to propose to her.  Well, obviously it’s too soon.  He knows that; he’s not actually an idiot.  But it’s getting harder and harder to keep from blurting the words out anyway.

He holds the door of the Riv open for her, but she doesn’t get in, she just stands there frowning at the car.

“What’s the matter?” he asks.

“You’re into classic cars,” she says.

“Yeah,” he admits cautiously, because it’s not like it’s a state secret, but what’s he supposed to do if it turns out she was bitten by a convertible when she was a kid or something?

She runs her hand over the roof of the car.

“When I got divorced, I made myself a promise.  I can’t marry someone who can’t do his own laundry.  Or someone who breaks things when he can’t figure out what to say.  Or someone who assumes driving is automatically his job.”

“I promise you, I have never punched a wall in my life and I’m not planning to start.”

Which he would have thought was the important item on that list, but Stella just nods like yeah, she figured that already, and looks at him over the door of the Riv.

“I am an expert laundry-doer,” he assures her.

She’s no dummy.  That’s right up there at the top of the list of reasons why he loves her.

Ray swallows, remembering Angie pulling away from his touch.

Can’t we both have the same dreams?

Maybe like never now.  Like maybe not-in-your-lifetime-now.

“Did you just say marry?”  His voice squeaks.

She nods, still looking him straight in the eyes.

“I’ll get one made for you,” he whispers, handing her his key.

Comments

[identity profile] malnpudl.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 01:58 am (UTC)
I love this enormously. ♥
desireearmfeldt: (Ellen Smiling)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks. :)
[identity profile] deborah-judge.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 02:19 am (UTC)
Stella is awesome here, she knows just what she wants and what she needs and I'm so glad her man is going to give it to her.
desireearmfeldt: (Pleased Ellen)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :)

I'm very fond of Stella.

(That's a sweet icon, by the way.)
[identity profile] deborah-judge.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's by [livejournal.com profile] view_paradise.

Stella is my absolute favourite dS character and I'm glad to see her getting appreciation.

[identity profile] seascribe.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 02:33 am (UTC)
So many hearts for this; for Stella keeping her promises to herself, and for Ray having grown up enough to be able to meet those criteria.
desireearmfeldt: (Pleased Ellen)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks. :)

I feel like canon!Vecchio, for all his good points, has some serious growing up to do. It's fun to imagine ways for him to do it.
[identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 02:52 am (UTC)
Now this is an instant relationship I can believe in! ♥
desireearmfeldt: (Pleased Ellen)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:54 pm (UTC)
Hee. :) Thanks!
[identity profile] exbex.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 03:13 am (UTC)
Suddenly a bit of canon that makes a bit more sense. Fanfic writer to the rescue. <3 Also <3 these versions of Stella and Vecchio.
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I am generally a fan of pairing off Stella & Vecchio, but it does require some thinking about how that could actually be a good idea... :)

Edited 2013-03-01 04:55 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] vickitub.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 08:53 am (UTC)
Very good, loved this
desireearmfeldt: (Ellen Smiling)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:56 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 12:16 pm (UTC)
Good for you, Ray! Arrrgh, I get so frustrated with Ray for that scene with Angie in the car--it's so good to see him get it right this time.
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 1st, 2013 04:56 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

Yeah, Ray and his women/romance Issues -- I seem to have decided that's an intriguing thing to think about... :)
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 3rd, 2013 11:24 am (UTC)
Just...YES. Just...oh this makes me feel happy.
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 4th, 2013 02:21 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
[identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 5th, 2013 03:28 am (UTC)
Yes! And YAY Ray for being a better person than he was with Angie.
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Mar. 5th, 2013 03:32 am (UTC)
:)

I have officially decided that Ray's issues with romance/women are Interesting Story Material.

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