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Original: Sedoka: Short Story

  • Apr. 5th, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Fandom: Original
Title: Short Story
Length: Sedoka (2 x 5/7/7 syllables); 29 words
Content notes: no warnings apply
Summary: too short to need one
Author note: this is the one I didn't want to write for the prompt, but it won't leave me alone or let me write anything else, so here it is.



Shoulder to cry on
leads to a hot summer night,
your naked shoulders, embraced.

A burden shouldered:
months of pining, then speech, hope
and its loss. Now: cold shoulder.

Comments

smallhobbit: (Edel Lion)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2017 12:28 pm (UTC)
I think this is very beautiful and captures the emotions perfectly.
clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2017 06:26 pm (UTC)
thank you - I couldn't get that image out of my head once I saw the prompt, so in the end I had to write it. I'm glad it worked for you.

Edited 2017-04-05 06:27 pm (UTC)
elizabeth_rice: Snoopy typing on his typewriter (Default)
[personal profile] elizabeth_rice wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2017 01:34 am (UTC)
I love it.
clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2017 07:39 am (UTC)
Thank you! *beams*

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