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Sherlock: Poem: Only Breakfast

Jun. 6th, 2012 at 10:49 AM

Title: Only Breakfast
Fandom: Sherlock
Rating: G

Only breakfast -
full English -
sat between
John Watson
and
Sherlock Holmes.
Kippers,
though,
might have been
Continents
for all the
proximity
Sherlock’s
glazed expression
conveyed.

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mrkinch wrote:

Jun. 6th, 2012 05:37 pm (UTC)

Ooh, nice! Beautifully conveyed.

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winnifreddirective wrote:

Jun. 16th, 2012 05:44 am (UTC)

Thanks! It felt short and sweet.

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kass wrote:

Jun. 6th, 2012 08:01 pm (UTC)

I really like "Kippers / though / might have been / Continents" -- that's lovely!

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winnifreddirective wrote:

Jun. 16th, 2012 05:45 am (UTC)

Thank you :) I think that bit might be my favorite part.

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pauraque wrote:

Jun. 7th, 2012 01:13 am (UTC)

I don't even know this fandom, but this short piece gets across the dynamic between the characters in an effective punch.

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winnifreddirective wrote:

Jun. 16th, 2012 05:46 am (UTC)

Thanks! I like to think there's an exasperated, pained look on Watson's face as this concept runs through his mind.

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elanya wrote:

Jun. 7th, 2012 02:21 am (UTC)

:D :D :D

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winnifreddirective wrote:

Jun. 16th, 2012 05:46 am (UTC)

Glad it made you smile. :)

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naryrising wrote:

Jun. 7th, 2012 02:24 am (UTC)

Very nice! I like the alliteration of kippers & continents especially :)

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winnifreddirective wrote:

Jun. 16th, 2012 05:47 am (UTC)

Thank you :) I'm rather a fan of it myself. I even wrestled with whether to keep kippers since they aren't part of traditional full breakfast, but the alliteration was too cozy to abandon.

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