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Primeval: Fanfic: Stop All The Clocks

  • Feb. 11th, 2012 at 8:59 AM
title: Stop All The Clocks
author: [personal profile] olivia_j
fandom: Primeval
characters: Claudia, OMC
rating: G
word count: 340
challenge: #1 lost hour
summary: A year was a long time, then.



A year was a long time, then. It seemed like forever, one autumn to the next when the air would chill and she could smell the edge of the cold, sharp inside her nose. "Come on, Claudie," her father would say (and he was the only one who ever called her that), "come on."

She was reading a book about ponies, sounding out the words like she was learning at school, and she frowned. "Time to change," her father said. "Daylight savings, Claudie. Time put the clocks back."

There were twelve clocks in their house, Claudia had counted, and, one by one, they wound them back. "Careful," her father said. He opened the glass front of the big clock in the hall, then lifted her up. "Gently," he said. "This is a grandfather clock and it's very old and special." Claudia reached out, pushing the long hand back in the wrong direction as slowly as she could.

"Whose grandfather?" she asked, because such a precious clock must belong to someone.

"No one's," her father said, smiling, and Claudia nodded, serious. There were so many things to think about, so many things that she didn't quite understand and she was sure that when she was older, it would all become clear.

"Where does the hour go?" she said, because it must go somewhere.

She thinks now that someone else's father might have given her some frivolous, silly answer, some throwaway lie about an hour going to fairyland or something equally ridiculous, but Claudia's father said, quite solemn, "The hour is given to someone who needs it."

"Who needs an hour?"

"Lots of people, Claudie." He looked sad, like he knew a terrible secret. "Lots of people need an hour."

And now Claudia can feel it, something ominous hanging over her, her reflection in the mirror broken into bright prisms. Something is coming, she knows, she can feel it deep in her bones, but she closes her eyes, shakes her head.

One more hour, she says to herself. One more hour.

Comments

sprat: an illustration of a girl posed in front of a cartoon alien  (Default)
[personal profile] sprat wrote:
Feb. 11th, 2012 04:32 am (UTC)
Ooh, I love this idea! It's totally childlike logic that everything has to go somewhere, and the father's response is perfect.
olivia_j: ([primeval] claudia red scarf)
[personal profile] olivia_j wrote:
Feb. 11th, 2012 07:13 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! As a child I was very unnerved by the lost hour and the timey-wimey-ness of it all seemed to really fit with Claudia. :-)
mergatrude: a skein, a ball and a swatch of home spun and dyed blue yarn (Default)
[personal profile] mergatrude wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2012 10:29 am (UTC)
I don't know the fandom at all, and thus may miss the deeper resonances, but this is a beautiful/terrible story with a great pre-apocalyptic feel. It gave me the shivers.
olivia_j: ([celeb] devon neck stunning)
[personal profile] olivia_j wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2012 05:29 am (UTC)
Yay, thank you very much! I'm especially flattered that you liked it given you don't know the fandom. :-)
aoifes_isle: (Default)
[personal profile] aoifes_isle wrote:
Mar. 10th, 2012 12:35 pm (UTC)
Oh my, oh my Claudia ...

I can remember asking that question - that and the one about the carriage clock. It's a beautifully evocative piece!
olivia_j: ([primeval] claudia red scarf)
[personal profile] olivia_j wrote:
Mar. 11th, 2012 08:08 am (UTC)
Yes! I actually based this on my own childhood questions. And thank you so much, I'm so very pleased you liked this!

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