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Original: Sedoka: Confession

  • Oct. 8th, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Title: Confession
Fandom: Original
Length: 28
Content notes: no warnings apply
Summary: too short to need one



You show me your heart,
thinking you're the only one
whose desires are unruly.

I confess the same,
and the landscape is altered.
I wander the shore alone.


Technical note

The website Shadow Poetry defines sedoka as "an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
A katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7."

Comments

smallhobbit: (butterfly)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Oct. 8th, 2016 03:02 pm (UTC)
This is lovely. It really captures the pain of believing you can share something only to learn the other person was not in fact as accepting as you are.
clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Oct. 8th, 2016 05:23 pm (UTC)
thank you! I hadn't thought of it in terms of acceptance, but I like that reading.

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