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Original: Sedoka: Dance Steps

  • Sep. 12th, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Title: Dance Steps
Fandom: Original
Length: 31
Content notes: character death
Summary: too short to need one





never learned to waltz
though you tried to teach me once
on the sitting-room carpet

grief's another dance
where I can't master the steps
and you're not here to guide me


Technical note

The website Shadow Poetry defines sedoka as "an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
A katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7."

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clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Sep. 18th, 2016 09:45 am (UTC)
thank you very much - and you're welcome!

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