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Original: Poetry: Clipped

  • Mar. 10th, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Title: Clipped
Fandom: Original
Rating: G
Length: 34 (sedoka)
Content notes: n/a
Author notes: Badges: SBIGTTS Writing
Summary: too short to need one



The sun rises up
As I, clipped-winged and bright-eyed
See others soar in the sky

Sun sets on the city
As they drop down to the ground
I wait. I can't fall any further.

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dariaw: Sunflower in foreground, with a sun-drenched field of sunflowers and the horizon in fuzzy focus in the background (Default)
[personal profile] dariaw wrote:
Mar. 11th, 2016 02:28 am (UTC)
nicely done!
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (Default)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Mar. 13th, 2016 09:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
smallhobbit: (butterfly)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Mar. 11th, 2016 08:53 am (UTC)
That's lovely, but very sad.
ardyforshort: A person in a chunky jumper holding a cup of coffee. (Default)
[personal profile] ardyforshort wrote:
Mar. 13th, 2016 09:49 pm (UTC)
There's hopefully more where this came from, which will hopefully be less sad.

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