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Title: Geometridae
Fandom: Hans Christian Andersen (1952 film)
Length: 100
Content notes: no warnings apply
Summary: Arithmetic is not the only way of organizing the world.




Hans listens to the voices of the children in the schoolroom chanting their arithmetic. It's a sad little tune, full of the longing to be outdoors. Hans wishes they could join him outside. The schoolmaster has closed the door against the flowers and the sunshine, against Hans and his stories.

"An inchworm!" Peter says, delighted, "The first of the year."

More arithmetic, Hans thinks; the inchworm is too busy measuring the flowers to stop and enjoy their beauty.

He doesn't make the connection himself till much later: like the ugly duckling, the inchworm will be transformed into something altogether unexpected.


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The scene that inspired the fic is here; the title refers to the species of moths to which the caterpillar belongs (a species which includes the Peppered Moth).

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copracat: danny kaye in santa hat with text "merry and bright" (merry and bright)
[personal profile] copracat wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2015 11:47 am (UTC)
This story's form is perfect for its meanings. It took me to that scene in the film instantly.

(I know my icon is out of season, but I had to!)
clarasteam: Maggi Hambling Scallop (scallop voices)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2015 09:02 pm (UTC)
thank you! I'm glad you liked it - and it's nice to see that icon.
badly_knitted: (Jack - Big Smile)
[personal profile] badly_knitted wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2015 07:01 pm (UTC)
That's just wonderful!
clarasteam: (Eeyore)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2015 09:03 pm (UTC)
thank you - and thank you for your encouragement to write something for the challenge! *beams*
badly_knitted: (Jack - Yay)
[personal profile] badly_knitted wrote:
Feb. 17th, 2015 10:26 pm (UTC)
You're welcome! It gave me the impetus I needed to sit down and work on my other vague idea, which is now posted. From having no ideas, I've managed to silly ficlets, so I'm happy too =D
clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2015 08:43 pm (UTC)
that's great - well done!
badly_knitted: (Rose)
[personal profile] badly_knitted wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2015 09:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
smallhobbit: (Default)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Feb. 21st, 2015 10:21 am (UTC)
A really imaginative take on that prompt.

And congratulations on so many different fandoms.
clarasteam: picture of louise brooks (Default)
[personal profile] clarasteam wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2015 08:43 pm (UTC)
thank you very much - and congratulations on all your badges!

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