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Justified: Fic: Back Again

  • Apr. 4th, 2012 at 11:05 AM
Title: Back Again
Fandom: Justified
Rating: PG
Length: 500
Content notes: References to violence/physical abuse.
Author notes: For [community profile] fan_flashworks Challenge #7, "Do-Over". I honestly think half this reason I like this show is that there's people with my native accent and vernacular on TV who aren't the butt of the joke.
Summary: Don't matter how often he's got to be there, he'll be there.



There's a phrase he heard tell once, somethin' about doin' things over and over and expectin' different results, but right this minute, as he's starin' down the barrel of a shotgun, he don't care about gettin' it right. He didn't expect no different results this time, when he stepped up on this porch and knocked. He knew what was comin'. "Now, Donna Jo," he says, both hands low at his sides. "That's hardly neighborly, puttin' a gun in a man's face like that this early."

Her blond hair is stuck on top her head, stickin' out all around like hay, and there's a yellow bruise around one eye. She's standin' sideways like her leg's got a world of hurt in it, but her hands ain't the least little bit shaky. She's got that shotgun aimed and she ain't takin' it down, no matter how many lawmen stand on her porch come lookin' for her man. "Not feelin' neighborly today," she says, and her tongue pokes through a hole between her teeth that she didn't have last week. "You get on out of here, Marshall. Ain't done nothin' wrong. Nobody here wants to see you."

It ain't the first time he's set foot on this creaky porch and sometimes he wonders why he bothers comin' back again. Donna Jo's man, he's got a hankerin' for the sort of substances that make him see little green monkeys and when he's lost another paycheck on the horses, those little green monkeys suggest that fists don't hurt none when they land on a woman. Raylan'll throw a punch when a body's got it comin', but this weren't deserved.

He moves slow, pushes his hat back on his head, and gives a nod to Donna Jo. "Then I'll be on my way, maybe get a coffee down at Mary's. She still got that wagon wheel over the door?" The shotgun lowers as he takes a step back, his boots on the step and then on the dirt. Raylan doesn't move his eyes from her face and there it is. That little flicker, that little glance. She'll rant and wail and shove a gun in his face for her man, no matter how many times Mike hits her, but ain't no defense'll keep her from givin' away where he's hidin'. He's in the house, probably in the room where Raylan can hear the TV and what might could be the open-up hiss of a fresh beer.

Raylan tips his hat and walks back a few more steps, smilin' to beat the band, until he's through the broken gate and by his car. Donna Jo slams the door and the whole house rattles and groans. Raylan leans on the roof of his sedan, scratchin' his brow. Donna Jo'll put that shotgun in his face another dozen times, he knows, but he'll come back every time. Her man has more to hide than wild fists and a weakness for the ponies, and Raylan has a pile of patience.

Comments

moetushie: Beaton cartoon - a sexy revolution. (Default)
[personal profile] moetushie wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2012 04:43 pm (UTC)
I have to say, it's your author's note that got me to read this. And though I'm in a whole different part of the country, I can appreciate that.

This was painful and good. I feel terribly for Donna Jo. :/
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2012 05:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Yeah, I've trained my speech to sound very much like "Newscaster English", to the point where people from my hometown have been known to ask where I'm from, but my native, "real" accent/dialect is quite obviously Appalachian. I really like Justified because the backwoods-hillbilly accent is not treated as something spoken by a bunch of uneducated yokels who only exist for the purposes of jokes about cow tipping, bass fishing, and cousin kissing. It's just how the people on the show talk. I don't know if the writers have a native of the area on their staff, but they really manage to get the patterns and vocabulary done well.

>.> /digression. I have Firm OpinionsTM on this accent, clearly.

And yes, poor Donna Jo. She might be my imaginary OC, but I hope she manages to get out of that situation.
storyfan: (Default)
[personal profile] storyfan wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2012 05:43 pm (UTC)
I don't know the fandom, but this story intrigues me so much I've got Season 1, Disc 1 in my netflix queue.
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2012 11:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's a very rough-and-ready show, that makes no apologies for violence and attitudes, but the main characters are thoroughly entertaining.
desireearmfeldt: (Default)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2012 02:33 pm (UTC)
What storyfan said -- I've never heard of the show, but this is a lovely little story. :)
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Apr. 5th, 2012 09:59 pm (UTC)
XD Thank you!

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