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due South:Poetry: Epistolary Acrostic

  • Dec. 2nd, 2014 at 2:01 AM
Title: Epistolary Acrostic
Fandom: Due South
Rating:PG
Length:~150
Author Notes:Fraser has something to confess.
Content Notes:none


1.
Dear Ray,
If only I could truly tell you what you mean to me
Somewhere more than here, back in my frozen home
Alone with my longings, though you
Sleep and eat and breathe beside me.
Too close, I fear, for your comfort, yet
Entirely too far for my stilted attempt at
Revealing how I feel.

2.
Fraser, c'mon!
Of course I know how you feel.
Really, I'd have to be an idiot
To let the fact that you love me, go
Unnoticed and unremarked.
No way, Fraser. Know this: we are on
Entirely the same page.

Comments

china_shop: Admin Frannie in her civilian aide uniform (Frannie admin)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2014 09:29 am (UTC)
Hi, please give this post a subject line (fandom: medium: title) -- thanks! :-)
hyperfocused: Hyperfocused=Fey, posh, crude (Lex)/Fed Our Psyche (MR/TW) D-Cup of Heresy (Chloe) (Default)
[personal profile] hyperfocused wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2014 12:28 pm (UTC)
Oops, sorry. That's what I get for posting at 2:00 a.m
ride_4ever: made for me by love_jackianto (It Looks Canon To Me)
[personal profile] ride_4ever wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2014 10:24 am (UTC)
I love your idea of using the acrostic form -- and now there's a due South acrostics plot bunny coming at me.

Good Fraser and Kowalski voices. And I love what is transpiring between these boys! *smishes them together*
hyperfocused: Hyperfocused=Fey, posh, crude (Lex)/Fed Our Psyche (MR/TW) D-Cup of Heresy (Chloe) (Default)
[personal profile] hyperfocused wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2014 07:56 pm (UTC)
Thanks, now I want to read your bunny:). I can't help thinking that had this taken place now, Ray's response would have been "Duh, Fraser +1"
butterflyghost: (Default)
[personal profile] butterflyghost wrote:
Dec. 2nd, 2014 10:32 am (UTC)
I like the differences between their voices, and the distinctiveness between their voices. Very well done.
hyperfocused: Hyperfocused=Fey, posh, crude (Lex)/Fed Our Psyche (MR/TW) D-Cup of Heresy (Chloe) (Fraser/Kowalski)
[personal profile] hyperfocused wrote:
Dec. 5th, 2014 11:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you (kindly, of course:))
jinkyo: (Mom loves us both)
[personal profile] jinkyo wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2014 07:27 am (UTC)
Delurking.

I dig it!
Also, ditto on the great job of the distinct voices. And, I really enjoyed the acrostic as structure.
hyperfocused: Hyperfocused=Fey, posh, crude (Lex)/Fed Our Psyche (MR/TW) D-Cup of Heresy (Chloe) (Default)
[personal profile] hyperfocused wrote:
Dec. 5th, 2014 11:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks for delurking with such kind words!

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