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Original: Poetry: little pig little pig

  • Sep. 19th, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Title: little pig little pig
Fandom: Original
Challenge: Riddle

Author's note: on the theme of things I can't figure out.


My friends tell me that it’s understandable, really
The daffodils of your excuses tended lovingly by others
Blooms extending well past first blush
To slide like vines across the windows

The garden is invisible to me, green grown thick
Like the forest for the trees, I try to say
Your hands are gone, but others
Graciously lay fertilizer for the lies

You didn't really mean it, they say
And I have no more life to breathe
The words you used against me

Comments

adafrog: (Default)
[personal profile] adafrog wrote:
Sep. 21st, 2025 02:54 am (UTC)
Well done.
mergatrude: (writing - poetry)
[personal profile] mergatrude wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2025 02:12 am (UTC)
Ouch!
teaotter: a girl in a pink coat that reads "anti social social club" (Default)
[personal profile] teaotter wrote:
Sep. 22nd, 2025 05:15 am (UTC)
Thank you, that's what I was going for.

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