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Star Wars: fanfiction: Trust The Force

  • Nov. 15th, 2022 at 8:51 PM
A/N: Forgot cut. Oops.
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: G

 I reach out into the Force consciously, listening to Luke. The Force feels fragile, yet strong to me, like Alderaanian silk hiding a dagger’s blade, like it had used to do, when Alderaan was split among the Noble Families, before an Old Queen had saved us.
 
“Trust it, Leia. Let go. I’ll guide you.” I hear his Tatooinian farmboy voice say to me, as he puts a hand on my left arm.
 
I take a deep breath, my eyes still closed, and let go, like he told me. I sense so much, and try to orient myself. I finally realize what I’m picking up for an instant, just before I have to drop the connection, as I’m being overwhelmed. I’m picking up the life Force of so many beings, and not just on this planet. I want to say I was picking up all the life in this system. Nothing feels like Vader did, thankfully.
 
I drop out of my calm state, panting, “I… I felt so much, Luke.”
 
“I told you you’ve got it, Leia.”
 

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[personal profile] shannnon_foraker wrote:
Nov. 16th, 2022 05:54 am (UTC)
I tried to do the cut tag, but it only seemed to gray out one paragraph. Checked it on the main page. It looked like it worked.

Edited 2022-11-16 05:56 am (UTC)
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[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Nov. 16th, 2022 06:00 am (UTC)
Looks good to me! *thumbs up*

If you want to add in a header (fandom, length, rating, etc) that would be cool, but no worries either way. :-)
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[personal profile] apachefirecat wrote:
Nov. 18th, 2022 02:15 am (UTC)
Hey, you're getting longer and doing better! Very descriptive here! Very good!!

If you would like some help on the header thing, I keep my basic template here - https://apachefirecat.livejournal.com/294.html You can always just copy/paste and then fill in your own information.
[personal profile] shannnon_foraker wrote:
Nov. 18th, 2022 03:38 am (UTC)
Thank you. I kinda got inspired this time round.
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[personal profile] apachefirecat wrote:
Nov. 19th, 2022 02:29 am (UTC)
Yay!!! That's what the comms are for!! And this has been one of my favorites for YEARS!!
[personal profile] shannnon_foraker wrote:
Nov. 19th, 2022 03:36 am (UTC)
Cool!

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