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original: poetry: leaving

  • Nov. 29th, 2020 at 6:06 PM
title: leaving
form: 4-stanza haiku
contents: sadness, raindrops


rain smears the windshield,
reshapes the world. reflections
flash like dragonflies

street lamps flicker by
cool chrysanthemums that bloom
and wilt in a blink

the radio sings
sad love songs in minor keys
worn, low-fi dreaming

the rain doesn't stop.
we pass another blurred sign:
airport, next exit

Comments

china_shop: New Zealand painting of flax (NZ flax)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Nov. 30th, 2020 03:08 am (UTC)
Oof! ♥
mergatrude: (writing-poetry)
[personal profile] mergatrude wrote:
Nov. 30th, 2020 05:56 am (UTC)


The imagery in this is beautiful. I love the streetlights/chrysanthemums.
yarnofariadne: morticia addams from the sitcom sitting in a chair (film: always been a daughter)
[personal profile] yarnofariadne wrote:
Nov. 30th, 2020 07:36 am (UTC)
Beautiful!

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