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Original : Poetry : Game, set and

  • Nov. 21st, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Title: Game, set and
Fandom: Original
Content notes: This is based on tanka form of 5 lines of 31 syllables or less, following the short/long/short/long/long form.
Author notes: not beta-ed
Summary: Sometimes you lose


once upon a time
your mouth was full of kisses
and pretty words
now I look closer and see
your smile doesn't reach your eyes

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china_shop: A beautiful warm curlicued cartoon heart in pinks and reds and yellows (heart - warm)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2019 02:29 am (UTC)
I don't know whether to say that's beautiful or really sad. Both?

♥ ♥ ♥
mergatrude: dandelion, with seed blowing against a blue background (dandelion)
[personal profile] mergatrude wrote:
Nov. 21st, 2019 02:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! ♥

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