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Title: The East Wind
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (ACD)
Rating: G
Length: 260
Summary:  2 August 1914, Holmes and Watson take a few moments to reflect at what will come to be the end of the world as they knew it.  Set at the end of His Last Bow.
Also written for [community profile] holmes_minor 's Small Moments of Happiness challenge.

Holmes and Watson stood on the terrace and looked out to sea.  Above them the stars shone brightly, as they had done for centuries before and as they would continue to do, despite what might happen in the coming years. 

Watson looked at the glimmering lights of the shipping in the bay and wondered when he would see the sight again.  Holmes had been right, he was going to join his old unit, for whatever happened the army would still need surgeons.  War was horrendous, but with any luck this would not last for more than a few months.  Nevertheless, Watson drank in the current sights and sounds.  He could hear a nightingale singing and realised this might be its final song before leaving the English shores to fly south.

Holmes too looked at the shipping, but he knew, far better than Watson, the level of devastation the war would bring.  Nevertheless, or perhaps for that very reason, he observed all that was around him, committing it to memory, keen not to let anything escape; the feel of the beginnings of a gentle warm breeze on his face, the scent of the crushed grass.

They chatted together, remembering some of their past adventures: the Woman; the ridiculous adventure of Jabez Wilson and the red-headed league; the strangeness of the six Napoleons.  Each was at ease with the other and making the most of what they were aware was but a few minutes of true happiness.

Neither would forget the moonlit sea and Holmes’ words that the East wind was coming.

 


Comments

stonepicnicking_okapi: okapi (Default)
[personal profile] stonepicnicking_okapi wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 12:01 pm (UTC)
Lovely rendering of a moment.
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson train)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 12:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much.
peoriapeoriawhereart: Cartoon Stantz post-kafoom (Default)
[personal profile] peoriapeoriawhereart wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 01:35 pm (UTC)
A bittersweet moment, as we know even more than Holmes. Holmes however shows us wisdom in addition.

Very nice.
smallhobbit: (Grave Stone)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 01:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you. It was hard writing it and only allowing Holmes a small idea of what was to come.
brumeier: (Default)
[personal profile] brumeier wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 02:51 pm (UTC)
Wow, so moody and lovely. Love that quiet moment between Holmes and Sherlock, knowing what's to come.
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson train)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 02:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much. And so much more than either of them could have imagined.
mafief: (Default)
[personal profile] mafief wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 03:06 pm (UTC)
The deep breath before plunging in to whatever may happen.
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson train)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 27th, 2018 03:20 pm (UTC)
Exactly - and making the most of that deep breath while you can.
scfrankles: knight on horseback with lance lowered (Default)
[personal profile] scfrankles wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2018 05:08 pm (UTC)
This really is a beautiful expansion of that moment in LAST. So well done.

I was particularly struck by the line: He could hear a nightingale singing and realised this might be its final song before leaving the English shores to fly south. It's so perfectly poignant.
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson train)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2018 05:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much.

I was checking when nightingales were in England to see whether Watson could hear one and the dates were perfect.
alessnox: Aless Nox - A writer (Default)
[personal profile] alessnox wrote:
Aug. 29th, 2018 01:39 am (UTC)
Lovely, bittersweet.
smallhobbit: (Holmes Watson train)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Aug. 29th, 2018 07:40 am (UTC)
Thank you very much.

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