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Title: Sleep on the road to Mordor
Fandom: Lord of the Rings
Rating: G
Length: 480 words
Content notes: Inspired by a drawing of Frodo and Sam in the Dead Marshes by Griddlebone that I found on DeviantArt. It intrigued me because the artist depicts Sam resting with his head on Frodo's lap, and that is not the usual dynamic for them.
Author notes: Book verse, specifically referencing The Two Towers chapter 'The Passage of the Marshes'.
Summary: It's Frodo's turn to offer comfort to Sam.




Sam is asleep, curled up on the marshy ground, too exhausted to care that his cheek rests in the mud or that a chill dampness seeps through his clothes. By the flicker of the unnatural light leaping up from the foetid marsh water, Frodo studies him. Sam's sleep-relaxed face has regained the round smoothness that the events of the past months have chiselled away and rendered far older than his actual years.

The dead faces in the water had rattled Sam; his dismay as he wrenched himself free from the oozing, clinging muck and stumbled to his feet, had been almost palpable. Then the shadow of horror, the wraith on wings, had flown over, and perhaps that had been one shock too many, even for his stalwart Samwise. A terrified Gollum had refused to let them journey on, so they'd hunkered down in place, and now Sam sleeps a heavy, almost drugged sleep.

Frodo sometimes forgets exactly how young Sam is, for his erstwhile gardener had flung himself into this adventure, if such it can be called, with the same fearless devotion and reckless abandon that he flung himself into the icy embrace of the Anduin to prevent Frodo from going off to Mordor alone. It occurs to Frodo now that, as Sam had needed Frodo to pull him from the river, perhaps there have been and will be other moments when Sam needs the same metaphorical helping hand. Must it always be Sam who is the caregiver? Even preoccupied with his burden as he is, can he not sometimes be the one to comfort and console, wonders Frodo.

On the thought, he shifts, easing closer to Sam, and slides his filthy hands underneath Sam's shoulders. He carefully lifts him, aware of Gollum's unblinking pinprick gaze observing him all the while, just far enough that he can pillow Sam's dirt-smeared face on his thigh. Sam remains a lax weight throughout the procedure, without stirring so much as a muscle.

It isn't much as comfort goes; but while his trousers are soiled, they are at least drier and warmer than the ground. Frodo leaves his right arm in place, supporting Sam strongly about the shoulders, but his left hand comes to rest lightly on Sam's chestnut curls, sodden and snarled. Gently Frodo works his fingers through them, separating the tangled strands in a soothing, repetitive motion that works to calm his own frayed nerves.

Sam will be horrified when he wakes and discovers that he has slept while Frodo has not. He will demand to know why Frodo didn't wake him, and likely call himself more of his gaffer's hard names. Almost Frodo smiles as he pictures Sam's indignant expression, but what tugs at his lips is as much the product of tenderness as it is of humour.

He may sometimes forget Sam's youth, but Frodo never forgets his loving heart.

~end~

Comments

shirebound: (Frodo comfort)
[personal profile] shirebound wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 07:09 pm (UTC)
What a loving, gentle story.
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! The drawing touched me and I liked the idea that Frodo was giving comfort to dear Sam. ♥ him.
ink_gypsy: (Halflings vs The World)
[personal profile] ink_gypsy wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 07:32 pm (UTC)
What a gorgeous piece of art, and your fic matches it in beauty and tenderness.
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:51 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Michele. I originally was going to post the drawing to Tol Eressea when I noticed the prompt 'role reversal' and it gave me a little plot bunny. :))
teaotter: a girl in a pink coat that reads "anti social social club" (Default)
[personal profile] teaotter wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 09:48 pm (UTC)
This is lovely. Your language is beautifully rich and rhythmic, which fits the softness of the image very well.
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I really, really appreciate it. I just discovered this community and I was glad to have inspiration to write something for it.
pretty_panther: (lotr: gandalf and g)
[personal profile] pretty_panther wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 10:18 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is just beautiful.
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you very, very much!
china_shop: Fraser's not so sure about that (Fraser Oh-I'm-not-so-sure-about-that)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 10:37 pm (UTC)
Hi! Just checking: do you have permission from the artist to repost the fanart here? If not, please link to the art instead of reproducing it here. Thanks! /mod
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:56 pm (UTC)
The problem is that I don't think the drawing is still up on DeviantArt. I tried to find it again to link to it, but I can't. What would you like me to do? Delete the artwork? I don't want to break any community rules so whatever you want me to do, I will do.
china_shop: Suspicious Kowalski looking through the glass panel in a door (RayK through window)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 09:58 pm (UTC)
I just had a look around DeviantArt, but neither [deviantart.com profile] Griddlebone nor [deviantart.com profile] the-Lady-Griddlebone have any art uploaded as far as I can see. Maybe the artist has taken down their work, maybe it's a different user again, or maybe (quite possibly) I'm missing something.

If you can't get the artist's permission, then yeah, please take down the artwork. How about replacing the drawing with a description? I know it's not as pretty an option, but we don't allow unauthorised reposting of other people's fanworks. Cool?
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 11:21 pm (UTC)
Well, there's almost 4000 Frodo/Sam drawings on DeviantArt, so it could be there but I couldn't find it again, and I didn't bookmark (won't make that mistake again!) But thank you for trying. That was sweet of you! I have removed the drawing. As I said, I don't want to break any rules! Thanks for being understanding!
china_shop: text icon that says "age shall not weary her, nor custom stale her infinite squee" (age shall not weary her)
[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Apr. 25th, 2013 02:47 am (UTC)
Okay, cool!

Thanks for being understanding!

That's what we're here for. :-) Thanks, you, and welcome to the comm! <3
addie71: (Frodo &amp; Sam)
[personal profile] addie71 wrote:
Apr. 23rd, 2013 10:56 pm (UTC)
What a lovely, lovely drawing. I do like that it is Sam being comforted by Frodo. And your ficlet is a perfect fit for it.

He may sometimes forget Sam's youth, but Frodo never forgets his loving heart. Beautiful.
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 01:57 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, Addie. It's so unusual to see Frodo comforting Sam, and it really inspired me. I'm glad you think the ficlet fits the drawing. :)))
[personal profile] luthienberen wrote:
Apr. 24th, 2013 08:02 pm (UTC)
A lovely touching gentle story with Frodo caring for Sam. It was perfect in its briefness in conveying tender concern & matching the artwork. Thank you lbilover for sharing.

Edited 2013-04-24 08:02 pm (UTC)
lbilover: (i will not say the day is done)
[personal profile] lbilover wrote:
Apr. 25th, 2013 01:39 pm (UTC)
You're most welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it very much.

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