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Title: Decision of action
Author [personal profile] mafief
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (ACD)
Rating: G
Length: blitz poem, 163 words
Content notes: Pre-slash. Holmes POV. Liberal use of chemistry terms.


Split the molecules
Split decision
Decision of silence
Decision to speak
Speak from the heart
Speak the truth
Truth that I hide
Truth observed in his reactions
Reactions that he can’t hide
Reaction sped with a catalyst
Catalyst are small
Catalyst for a life change
Change in status
Change to try
Try admitting
Try first a test
Test tube contains a reaction
Test forms precipitate
Precipitate out of solution
Precipitate a crisis
Crisis management
Crisis point
Points of interest
Points to record
Record the findings
Record and make know the facts
Facts seen in his actions
Facts about his spirit
Spirit to loosen his tongue
Spirit that need distilling
Distilling the vapors
Distilling the feelings
Feelings of fear
Feelings so strong
Strong forces
Strong interactions
Interactions with meaning
Interactions that are unfaltering
Unfaltering faith
Unfaltering bonds
Bonds in chemistry
Bonds of love
Love of problems
Love of solutions
Solutions require faith
Solutions need action
Action to love
Action of courage
Courage...
Love...

Comments

smallhobbit: (Holmes umbrella)
[personal profile] smallhobbit wrote:
Oct. 29th, 2017 02:16 pm (UTC)
Another excellent blitz poem. Your use of this form is great.
mafief: (Default)
[personal profile] mafief wrote:
Oct. 29th, 2017 04:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm having lots of fun with it. This was the first one I wrote. The second one was the piece posted on holmes_minor.

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