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Title: At first
Author: godsdaisiechain
Fandom: Torchwood
Type: Fic
Characters/Pairing: Ianto and Jack, Ianto and Lisa
Challenges: Flavor, Sweet and Sour, Spicy
Word Count: ~350
Rating: PG
Summary: Ianto and Jack consider the meaning of pork.


*-*-*-*
A date.

Ianto nearly wriggled; he felt tingly all over in a way that Lisa had never made him feel.  Even though he didn’t like men that way.  It was Jack. Not "men." Just Jack.

At first, Ianto told himself, he just wanted the job, to prove himself, because he had to hide his now only semi-human semi-cyborg—and if he knew it, all-dangerous—girlfriend before she tried to exterminate (or, as she put it, "upgrade") the human population.

Jack was just a man in a coat standing in his way.  He hadn’t meant to say anything, but Jack had been so infuriatingly smug, so determined to keep him out of Torchwood.  Even thogh Ianto was from Torchwood One.  The Real Torchwood, not some flimsy backwater.

“Like the coat,” Ianto had said, nearly feeling the flavor of boiled wool over his tongue.  It took even him by surprise.

Then it had become something else, a secret between them, even though Ianto hadn’t seen Jack’s fond smiles. It was almost as if he had felt them.

Just as he had felt that Jack did, indeed, love him.  Even though he never said so.  Not even in that final moment.

*-*-*-*

Sweet and sour or spicy?  Jack found himself wondering what kind of Chinese takeaway to order.  He and Ianto had had a very successful first date, even though there had not been any kissing. Or anything more.  Ianto was not the sort for public displays of affection with a man. Not yet, at least.

Jack wanted to stay in for some private displays of affection.  Or sex.  He wasn’t quite sure which, precisely, because he tended to grow overly attached when he shouldn’t.

Inspiration struck. “Sweet and sour pork,” he ordered, “Spicy pork.  And pork egg rolls," he paused because the woman seemed confused by the monolithic (or in fact mono-fleshic) ordering. "And wonton soup. With pork. Yes. All pork. Pork, pork, pork and pork.”

Ianto came in just as Jack made up his mind. “I didn’t realize you liked pork so much.”

“I prefer something more sensual at first,” Jack replied evenly, thinking back to a night many decades before, whispering in the ear of a red-eyed Italian.  Ianto flushed, suddenly understanding what he had said, and Jack felt his heart soften.  “Rather more sensual.”

He let his fingers brush Ianto’s hand.  “Ah,” Ianto gasped.

“Do we need the food?”

“We will later,” said Ianto.

Comments

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[personal profile] china_shop wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 03:14 am (UTC)
Hi! Please include the media in the subject line -- thanks! :-)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 05:22 am (UTC)
oops....
bk_forever: (It Happened One Day)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 12:07 pm (UTC)
Sweet, and they will definitely need the food later, though aybe Jack should have ordered a bit of something other than pork to go with the pork, just for variety. ianto might not be quite such a fan as Jack is ;)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 08:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the kind words on this, my very first Torchwood fic.

I see your point, of course, but I also have a funny feeling that Ianto might not care so terribly much about the food options.
bk_forever: (Jack - Ianto Be Naked)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 08:51 pm (UTC)
It wasn't a critique on your story, I was just teasing your Jack. I think Jack sometimes gets too fixated on one thing. Of course, it's usually Ianto he's fixated on, which is a good thing ;)

Always good to see another writer of Torchwood!
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 11:30 pm (UTC)
Oh no! I was just trying to tease back.... (apparently unsuccessfully). I guess I should have put in a few winks.
; )

I must confess that until last week I had never seen Torchwood and I binge streamed it in one fell swoop (and not, not, not liking Series 4 anywhere near as much as the others, let me tell you).



bk_forever: (Laughing Jack)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2016 10:59 am (UTC)
I loved the first two seasons, despite its faults, hated the way season three destroyed everything that I associated with the show, and didn't bother watching season 4 at all. Mostly I ignore CoE and Miracle Day, and write as if they never happened, lol!

Winks are very handy, teasing and sarcasm don't always come across clearly in comments I guess. It's something I've run into before.

Glad to have someone else come to Torchwood, there seem to be so few of us left. Check out [livejournal.com profile] torchwood_fest if you'd like to play a bit more, there are lots of prompts available for the Summer Fest and more writers are needed. Posting of entries starts on July 2nd. Only two people wrote for the Winter Fest, so we desperately need new blood and you'd be very welcome. It's pretty low-key, you don't need to claim prompts or anything, just write whatever inspires you. There'll be weekly prompts throughout the posting period too.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 01:56 am (UTC)
That looks very fun! I'd love to try it out!!
bk_forever: (Film Star Smile)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 08:54 am (UTC)
I hope you do, it would be nice to know I'm not the only one writing. I've done one so far, might try my hand at some of the weekly prompts. Unfortunately I forgot to leave any prompts myself this time. Too much going on elsewhere.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 01:30 am (UTC)
As I said, sounds fun!! I'm now rewatching season 1 to see when Jack and Ianto start playing hide the salami...
bk_forever: (Kiss)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 01:32 pm (UTC)
Opinions on that vary throughout the fandom. Some think they were at it while Ianto was hiding Lisa, others that they didn't start until Ianto propositioned Jack with the stopwatch (TKKS). Mostly I go with them being together before Lisa was discovered, because Jack just seemed so betrayed, but everyone has their own opinion, I don't think there's really a definitive answer. So much of Torchwood is open to individual interpretation, which is a dream for fanfic writers.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 02:38 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the answer. It's reassuring to know that I didn't miss some obvious cue.
bk_forever: (Film Star Smile)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 03:52 pm (UTC)
You're welcome, always happy to be of assistance if I can.

It's sad that the fandom isn't as active as it was 8 years ago when I first took the plunge into fanfic, but those of us still around are a friendly bunch and always happy to discuss all things Torchwood =)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2016 11:40 pm (UTC)
And PS... I hope you like the other fic... I know it's a series 3 one (and series 3 sucks because of all the dying and the viruses)....
bk_forever: (Default)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2016 11:01 am (UTC)
It's on my list to read when I have time. Sundays are busy and I have a hospital appointment tomorrow, so I'm having to leave catching up with my reading at the moment. So much writing to do...
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 01:55 am (UTC)
Good luck with the hospital!
bk_forever: (JB Weird)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 08:56 am (UTC)
Thanks, I'm really not looking forward to it. I have to starve myself all day. At least I can distract myself by writing until it's time to leave.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 12:41 pm (UTC)
Fingers crossed for you.... and your writing ; )
bk_forever: (Default)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2016 03:08 pm (UTC)
Re:
Leaving in about an hour - damned evening appointments for procedures *rolls eyes*

Writing went well, over 1800 words. That's my drabbles for [livejournal.com profile] tw100 for the new prompt (six this week instead of my usual four) and my piece for the new challenge at [livejournal.com profile] beattheblackdog. Very satisfactory, frees me up for Challenge Week at fic_promptly =)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 01:11 am (UTC)
Re:
Hope you're OK!! Congrats on all the writing!!
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[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 01:50 pm (UTC)
Re:
Thank you. I survived, and I've even managed to write for Day 1 of Challenge Week, despite my brain still feeling a bit slow from the sedation. =)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 02:39 pm (UTC)
Kudos on starting to write again. Get well soon!!
bk_forever: (Film Star Smile)
[personal profile] bk_forever wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2016 03:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you =)

Writing is my escape, I haven't missed a day in two and a half years, even though on a couple of days I managed less than 100 words. I love writing =D

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