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BBC Sherlock: Fanfic: Metal

  • Feb. 8th, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Title: Metal
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Rating: Gen
Length: 452
Content notes: Alternate Universe; Sherlock/John
Author notes: First posting to the comm. Sent by [livejournal.com profile] godsdaisiechain and [livejournal.com profile] thesmallhobbit
Summary: Sherlock is an alchemist.


He was close, so close that he could almost taste the gold. All the elements were there. The fire was burning hot beneath the glass flask. The water was pure and clear; he had collected it himself from the highest mountain top in the land. The earth, the rock, that is, he had also collected, quarried with his own hands. The air was his own breath.

He slowly added the elixir and waited for the dark rock to transform. To transmute. To change into treasure.

Nothing.

He screamed and hurled the flask at the wall. And like the flask, he shattered and fell to the floor, his hands covering his head.

He was a natural philosopher. A seeker of truth. A dispeller of darkness. A riddle solver. He would know what others did not know.

He knew nothing.

There was light.

He screamed.

“Hello there?”

His eyes struggled to focus. There was a figure, standing in the doorway. With the bright sun behind him, he looked like a statue. A golden statue that moved and spoke his name.

“Sherlock? Sherlock the Alchemist? I’m here to assist you.”

“I don’t need an apprentice!” he growled.

“Good. Because I have no interest in learning your trade.”

“Then why…? Oh, my brother sent you to spy on me! And once I’ve discovered the Philosopher’s Stone, you will connive with him to snatch it from me and line your own purses! Go away!”

“Your brother did send me. He paid me a week’s wage, and I took it because that is bread to me. Here,” he extended his hand, “is half. I will tell him only what you bid me.”

“Why should I take his filthy lucre?”

“You are after gold, aren’t you? Here it is, in my palm.”

“I am after truth!” he roared. “I am a seeker of truth, a dispeller of darkness—“

“Really? How about this then?” The curtain was torn back; light flooded the room.

He screamed for a third time.

“You are not half as old as your bleating. You need fresh air and more than a bit of sustenance and some order to this place.”

“I don’t need a maid! Or a wife!”

“How about a scribe? I can read and write. You do your work, I record it. For you—and for others, perhaps for many generations to come—to learn.”

He stroked his beard. Impossible to deny that there was a fleck of wisdom in the stranger’s hubris.

“One week and if I give no satisfaction, I leave.”

“What is your name?” he asked sharply.

“John.”

By week’s end, he had abandoned his quest for gold, and set off to find truth, his treasure by his side

Comments

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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 06:35 pm (UTC)
Oh, you have such a way with words ^^"

This is lovely - what a brilliant transmutation of the source material ^_^ That's such a wonderful last line, and I love the little touches of humour in John's reactions to Sherlock.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 06:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! You are very kind to me. I'm glad you liked it.

At first, I was hesitant to go in for this comm, but the badges really make it worthwhile. I like the fact that you're only competing against your own creativity and/or productivity. There's no hit or kudos counter to stare back at you. And there are so many different kinds of badges, they are like prompts in themselves, no?

My hat is off to you, you write original fiction. Like from scratch. That puts you in a higher, entirely different, league of creativity. If I didn't have Sherlock and John to start with, I probably wouldn't be writing.
ext_1620665: knight on horseback (Default)
[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 10:18 pm (UTC)
I like the fact that you're only competing against your own creativity and/or productivity. I agree with you there - it's a positive thing. And I agree about the badges acting as prompts ^^

But honestly, writing original fiction is not a higher form of creativity. I write original fiction and fanfiction, and personally I find fanfiction more difficult. It's a tougher discipline, and I can only admire writers like you who write it well. And as far as I can tell, people who write fanfiction well generally write original fiction well too.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 07:55 pm (UTC)
So pleased to see you here!

And what a great take on the prompt.
ext_1789368: okapi (Okapi)
[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 08:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Thank you! Hope you enjoy your kitchen appliance.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 09:13 pm (UTC)
It will come in very useful.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 10:05 pm (UTC)
Yeah!!! I love this. You transmuted Mycroft to gold.

ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 8th, 2016 11:00 pm (UTC)
Hee, hee. Thank you. It would've been nice to work in his POV in this somehow. Enjoy your dinosaur toast with your new...game show announcer voice...toaster!
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 9th, 2016 01:48 am (UTC)
Yeah! Thank you so much for indulging my passion for badges.
ext_1789368: okapi (Default)
[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 9th, 2016 01:50 am (UTC)
I cannot deny my friend, the Hans Sloane of badges, an addition to the collection :)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 9th, 2016 01:57 am (UTC)
It's crazy how excited I am to have the toaster badge....

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