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Henry V: Fanfic: Crossing the Water

  • Jan. 22nd, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Title: Crossing the Water
Fandom: Henry V
Rating: G
Length: 491
Summary: The night before the battle of Agincourt, King Henry pauses to gather his thoughts

He stopped and shut his eyes, pausing to calm his churning mind as it evaluated plans of attack and counter-attack; too many thoughts piling in at once and no possibility to bring in any order.  He forced him mind to go elsewhere and let the murmur of the Welsh voices around him take him back to Monmouth, to the place of his birth.

He could see the grey stones of the castle, the darkness inside it, feel the coldness of the stones.  He remembered a fair, with the bright colours of the stalls and of the wares the peddlers were selling.  He saw the men in their caps, no difficulty to remember them, for many of his soldiers still wore them with pride.

Similar stones to those in the castle had formed the Monnow Bridge, with its gatehouse built on top.  He recalled pretending to defend the bridge with his brothers, not letting the enemy through the gateway, imagining the iron portcullis being brought down to protect his men.  He smiled at the childish enthusiasm, knowing now how an army could easily have forded the river, without need to resort to the bridge.

Not so the Wye, where a wooden bridge led from the town towards the border with England.  He thought he and his small brothers had once planned to march across it, leading an army to glory.  From the bridge they could see the Forest of Dean, the tall trees verdant and plentiful.  But, he reflected, mindful of the comments of some of his commanders, not as good as the Welsh yew, which provided the wood for their longbows.

He remembered the Wye as a peaceful river, flowing under the bridge.  He thought of it as having been blue, with occasional silver ripples as the salmon leapt upstream.  To his childish mind Monmouth, with the Wye on one side and the Monnow curving round from the other, had seemed protected by the flow of blue water, an island of peace and safety.

But they had never stayed long.  They would leave behind the blue of the Wye to cross the River Severn.  Far more powerful, it seemed to sweep all before it.  The water was always grey, if not brown, where the river churned as the incoming tide met the waters coming down from further north.  This was not a river of safety, but one which spelled death and destruction for the unwary.  At one time it would appear narrow and inviting, mud banks visible on either side, yet but hours later the waters would be rolling down and anything on those banks would be underneath the cold wet darkness.

And now he had crossed an even greater expanse of water, with more men than he had ever imagined in his childhood games.  And as the waters grew bigger, so did his responsibilities.  There was no more time for memories, there were plans to be made for the morrow.

Comments

[identity profile] laurose8.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 22nd, 2016 10:15 pm (UTC)
See, Bill, you can have good fanfiction.

I bet he'd love it, too. Thank you for sharing it with us. All excellent, and what a good end.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 22nd, 2016 10:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm delighted you liked it.
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[identity profile] okapi1895.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 22nd, 2016 11:19 pm (UTC)
I like the nostalgic picture this paints of a childhood haunt. A nice read. Thank you.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 22nd, 2016 11:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm delighted you liked it.
[identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 23rd, 2016 03:15 am (UTC)
lovely!
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 23rd, 2016 08:06 am (UTC)
Thank you.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2016 01:21 am (UTC)
There were plans to be made for the morrow.... this brings me right back to the first time I saw this play. Thanks so much.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2016 02:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm delighted it brought back a memory for you too.
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2016 10:55 pm (UTC)
That is absolutely wonderful - makes the king seem so human. I especially admired your descriptions of the Wye and the Severn.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 24th, 2016 11:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the descriptions - I enjoyed using my own memory.
[identity profile] lilliburlero.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2016 06:08 pm (UTC)
I tell you there is good men porn at Monmouth! This is really touching, and as a Fluellen fan I'm kind of touched by the suggestion that Henry isn't just humouring him (tho' it's often played a bit like that): the Welsh part of his identity really is important to him. And I love the reference to the Monmouth caps as well.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2016 07:52 pm (UTC)
I'm so pleased you liked it. I think Henry, as a good commander, would appreciate the support of his Welsh troops, and this might be slightly fanciful, but I felt still plausible. I enjoyed the opportunity to describe Monmouth a little.
[identity profile] lexigent.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2016 10:43 pm (UTC)
I really love the sense of place in this, and the link with the children's war games. You probably know how I think Henry, at heart, is still a small child who wants to run away even on the eve of battle, so him turning to childhood memories here makes complete sense to me - and finding unexpected strength there, yes, just, yes.
Thank you very much for this glimpse of his past.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2016 11:25 pm (UTC)
I'm so pleased you like this. And that you can see Henry finding strength from his childhood memories. I enjoyed being able to use my own memories too.

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