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Title: Thorin's Decision
Fandom: The Hobbit
Rating: G
Length: 28
Content: Spoilers for "Battle of the Five Armies"  My thanks to [livejournal.com profile] fengirl88 for introducing me to the sedoka
Summary: Thorin has to decide between Heaven and Hell





The gold is all mine
I respect no promises
I cannot trust anyone

I will resist this
I am not my grandfather
Follow me for one last time?

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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 27th, 2014 05:40 pm (UTC)
I don't have enough knowledge about The Hobbit to fully understand the context, but I get the idea and your poem is very elegantly done.

I've been looking up the sedoka - I'm going to have a go myself, I think ^^ (My sort of thing, of course - form and brevity.)

[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 27th, 2014 08:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you.

The sedoka is a great form - I believe the idea is that each half shows a different view of a situation, which is what I was trying for.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 28th, 2014 03:50 am (UTC)
This is fabulous and it's not really that spoiler-y. I love the way it captures so much emotion in so few words.
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 28th, 2014 06:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much, I'm delighted you liked it.

I suspect none of this would come as a surprise to anyone who had seen the trailer, but I would rather warn than not.

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