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Sherlock (BBC): Fanfic: True Kindness

  • Dec. 13th, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Title: True Kindness
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Rating: G
Length: 429
Summary: Sherlock doesn't want offers of help

Mrs Hudson listened to the angry words Sherlock was saying to his brother as he saw him out.  She felt a certain sympathy for Mycroft; he might be a pompous pain at times, but on this occasion his motivation had been genuine.  Hearing Sherlock thumping back up the stairs from the front door she opened her own door and called out to him.

“Come in and have a cup of tea with me, Sherlock.”

“No,” Sherlock answered, then added “Thank you” when her expression reminded him of the one his mother had used when he was a small boy.

“It’s not a request, Sherlock Holmes, it’s an order.  Come in!”

“I have to get back.  Victor may need me.”

“You wouldn’t have left him, even to throw insults at your brother, if he hadn’t been asleep.  You have enough time for a cup of tea.”

Sherlock admitted defeat.  If he was honest with himself, he would have acknowledged that he didn’t have the strength to argue.

Mrs Hudson made the tea and produced a fruit cake.  She cut a slice and pushed the plate over to where Sherlock’s hand was resting on the table, so that he would pick the cake up without realising what he was doing.

“Why don’t they leave me alone?  John, and Mary, and Molly, coming round and talking to me,” Sherlock said.

“All of them, yes, even your brother, are only being kind,” Mrs Hudson replied.  “They want to help.”

“I don’t want their kindness.”  Sherlock banged the table with his fist; then added in a much quieter tone, “I just want Victor to get better.”

“I know you do.  And he is.  But it’s very slow and so you’re not seeing the improvement.  You’ve been keeping records.  Why don’t you look back and compare your notes from this time last week to today?  I’m sure you’ll find there’s a difference.”

She watched as Sherlock considered what she’d said, mentally comparing his observations.

After a few minutes Sherlock smiled slightly.  “You were right, Mrs Hudson.  There have been a number of small, but significant changes.”  He stood up.  “Thank you.  May I go now?”

“Of course you may.  Take the rest of the cake with you, you might like some more later.  And I expect the inspector will eat a slice or two when he calls in.”  Mrs Hudson paused and then added, “You didn’t include Greg in your list of unwanted visitors.”

“That’s because he’s like you, Mrs Hudson.  He doesn’t ask me what he can do to help.  He just does it.”

Comments

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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2014 05:44 pm (UTC)
This is so true. When things are going badly, you don't want sympathy and abstract offers of kindness, however well-intentioned. It's just extra stress that has to be politely dealt with. (Or not politely dealt with, if you're Sherlock ^^) You want understanding and practical help. Well done to Mrs. Hudson - excellent stuff ^^
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2014 09:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you. Mrs Hudson has plenty of experience, both of life in general and of Sherlock in particular, so knows to provide him with tea, cake and a reminder that Victor is improving.
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2014 09:41 pm (UTC)
I love this... the fact that Sherlock knows who Greg is when Mrs. Hudson says his name, especially.

...but rather stupid question: who is Victor?
[identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2014 09:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you. In my world Sherlock is fully aware of Lestrade's name.

Victor is Victor Trevor, who appears in the ACD story The Gloria Scott. They are at university together and become good friends. There is a (admittedly small) strand of BBC fandom that pairs Sherlock with Victor (it's known as Viclock).
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Dec. 14th, 2014 01:50 am (UTC)
Ah! My ACD knowledge is sadly underpar. Thanks for the explanation.

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