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Sherlock (BBC): Fanfic: Indecision

  • Nov. 10th, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Title: Indecision
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Author: tardisjournal
Summary: Sherlock had always prided himself on his powers of deductive reasoning. He could visualize, work through, and discard more options in seconds than most people could in days or even weeks.

So why was this decision so difficult?
Characters/Pairings: Sherlock Holmes, John Watson; Sherlock Holmes/John Watson
Rating: PG
Word count: 221 (a 221B drabble)
Spoilers/Warnings: Mild for S1.02--"The Blind Banker"
Additional Tags: Angst, Humor, Sherlock Holmes Has Feelings
A/N: Written for the fan_flashworks challenge "choices".



Sherlock sat motionless in his armchair, staring straight ahead over steepled fingers. By all appearances he was insensible to the world, but in truth he was acutely, even painfully, aware of John's movements in his bedroom upstairs.

A creak of the floor and the answering squeak of a cupboard door hinge told him that John was getting dressed. He would be downstairs, if he followed his usual pattern, within minutes. Though perhaps in a few more minutes than usual. The deliberate pace of his footsteps; the way he'd lingered in the bathroom over shaving, told Sherlock he was taking extra care in getting ready for his date tonight.

A first date. John spent more time getting ready for them than he did for anything else; even his job interview at the clinic hadn't merited this much grooming. First dates, Sherlock had learnt by observing his flatmate, were important. Appearances mattered. Even if said date was with someone you worked with; someone who already knew what you looked like.

John's door opened. Sherlock sprang from his chair, bolted down the hall to his room, and slammed his own door shut. He needed more time. John would be looking for him soon, and he still hadn't made up his mind on this most vital and important matter.

The purple shirt or the black?

Comments

desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Nov. 11th, 2014 04:37 pm (UTC)
:)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 11th, 2014 09:52 pm (UTC)
;)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 10:32 pm (UTC)
Do you have a preference for which shirt color Sherlock picks? Some people started leaving comments with theirs so I thought I'd take a vote. The winning shirt gets featured in a sequel! :)
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 10:37 pm (UTC)
Hee hee hee.

How about purple?

ETA: I voted before looking at the other people's comments...apparently I'm on Team Unsubtle. :)

The real question is, whichever shirt Sherlock picks, what does he think the pros and cons are? (And, what's John's opinion?)

Edited 2014-11-14 10:39 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 11:03 pm (UTC)
Love it! Thank you so much!

To be honest, when I wrote this I thought that if there were any opinions at all, the purple shirt would be the resounding choice. When black started turning up in the comments, I decided to put it to an actual vote when I posted this to the comms, to see if that pattern would hold. (You're not the only one to vote for purple, btw. Just the only one here, thus far.)

There's nothing wrong with "unsubtle"! Sherlock is, after all, known for being about as subtle as a brick upside the head. ;) Perhaps the purple shirt will suit his purposes exactly.

You are correct--what's really important is what Sherlock thinks, and, of course, what John thinks when he sees Sherlock in it! I'll work that out once we have a winner! :-p

Edited 2014-11-14 11:06 pm (UTC)
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 11:08 pm (UTC)
I enjoy that you're making this interactive. :) I'm not in Sherlock fandom in any social sense, but I enjoy dipping into it occasionally. :)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 15th, 2014 09:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you for participating! :) This is turning out to be so much fun. Right now the voting is so close I still have no idea which shirt is going to win!
[identity profile] jolinarjackson.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 11th, 2014 07:35 pm (UTC)
Aw! I love this! :)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 11th, 2014 09:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 10:33 pm (UTC)
Me again! Do you have a preference for which shirt color Sherlock picks? Some people commented with theirs so I thought I'd put it to a vote. The winning shirt gets featured in a sequel! :)
[identity profile] jolinarjackson.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 15th, 2014 05:03 pm (UTC)
Black. Purple is good too, but for a date, he would probably change his usual style ... :)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 15th, 2014 09:47 pm (UTC)
That's a very good point. He seems to favor the purple quite a bit for "everyday" wear--he might well want to do something different to mark the significance of the occasion. One more for black, then!

Thank you!
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[identity profile] scfrankles.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 11th, 2014 11:05 pm (UTC)
I do love a good 221B. And this is a good 221B ^_^ The story fits its form perfectly, and that's a lovely twist. I thought it was rather endearing that Sherlock doesn't realise that, though John is taking an awful lot of care over his own appearance, he won't be bothered about the specifics of Sherlock's appearance ^^

(Though incidentally: Sherlock, the purple shirt has a great many fans, but I think you should go with the black ^_^)
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 13th, 2014 08:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I really appreciate that, especially coming from a master of short-form stories such as yourself. :)

(I'm inclined to agree! Though the Purple Shirt of Sex has so many fans it probably qualifies as its own fandom at this point, the black one is so sleek and understatedly elegant.)
[identity profile] godsdaisiechain.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 02:09 pm (UTC)
Purple might be too obvious... ; )

Delightful.
[identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2014 06:39 pm (UTC)
Delicious, to be sure, but maybe a bit too obvious. Wouldn't want to be too predictable! I'm sure Sherlock is factoring that into his decision right now! :-p

Thank you!

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