http://lothiriel84.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lothiriel84.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2013-10-24 01:08 pm

Triangle: The Mentalist: Fanfic: Too Much Love Will Kill You

Title: Too Much Love Will Kill You
Fandom: The Mentalist
Rating: PG-13
Length: 200 words
Content notes: No spoilers.
Author notes: A double drabble. Written for the amnesty challenge on [livejournal.com profile] fan_flashworks. Title borrowed from the namesake song by Queen.
Summary: In a way it had been a ménage à trois for years now.



In a way it had been a ménage à trois for years now. Jane’s feelings for Lisbon had been running deep for a long time and yet, Red John still mattered more to him in many ways. And while Red John craved Jane’s undivided attention, he was growing increasingly interested in the petite brunette that always stood by her partner even in spite of her better judgment.
Ultimately, the serial killer decided there was one person too many in this relationship; taking Lisbon out of the equation was the best solution for everyone involved. However, his hand wavered when Jane unexpectedly lowered the gun he’d been wielding, then aimed it at his own head.
John couldn’t afford losing him, no matter how hard he tried to deny it; his knife clattered on the tiled floor before the CBI agent extracted herself from his grasp and cuffed him.
He tried to meet Patrick’s eyes one last time, but in the end just couldn’t. Jane stood rooted to the spot, his head bowed as if in defeat; he didn’t stir as Lisbon escorted his enemy out of the building.
Luckily John always kept a cyanide capsule in his pocket, just in case.

[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com 2013-10-24 11:29 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I couldn't tell from your fic that English isn't your first language!

"To pack a wallop" means "to be hard-hitting," to make one feel as if struck by a great force. In the context of being a comment about someone's creative effort, it means the work is powerfully effective.