ext_2251 ([identity profile] astrogirl2.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2012-02-04 10:51 am

Doctor Who: Fanfic: A Dropped Stitch

OK, I'll play. Although, uh, is everybody but me over on Dreamwidth?

Title: A Dropped Stitch
Fandom: Doctor Who (new series)
Rating: G
Length: 200 words
Content notes: No warnings apply.
Summary: The Doctor has an hour that he's cut out of the continuum.

A Dropped Stitch

The Doctor has an hour that he's cut out of the continuum and saved like a coupon. It's not a pleasant hour, not one he likes to think about revisiting. It's an hour ripped from the worst days of the Time War, when anything was possible and one carefully hoarded moment might make all the difference between survival and destruction.

In the end, he hadn't needed it. It took almost no time at all to send Gallifrey to its fate, even if it felt to him like multiple eternities. And so he kept it, locked in a special box, hidden away in a safe place. One day he'll probably need it, when he's an hour short and having a time machine doesn't help. (Non-Time Lords -- essentially everyone, now -- don't understand why he doesn't have all the time he wants. But you can only cheat Time when she's distracted, and she doesn't blink often. Having a card up your sleeve is always useful.)

One day, he is sure he will need to see that hour again, whether he wants to or not. He only hopes that when that day comes, he'll finally be able to remember where he put it.

[identity profile] argentum-ls.livejournal.com 2012-02-04 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice job! As someone who perpetually loses things and is always coming up short on time, I empathize so strongly with his stored hour, one that he won't want to use, but probably will have to.

[identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com 2012-02-04 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, wow, this is great! Perfectly constructed, not a word wasted. Awesome.

And thanks for breaking the ice over here! Things have been contained on DW so far, but sometimes it just takes someone brave enough to break the ice. :D
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[personal profile] thisbluespirit 2012-02-04 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, lovely! And so very Doctorish. Funny and yet with a poignant edge. :-)

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[personal profile] china_shop 2012-02-04 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohh, nicely done! I like this a lot. *applauds*
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[identity profile] wihluta.livejournal.com 2012-02-05 04:03 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this. Really bittersweet!

It's very similar to my idea for the challenge (which will have to wait until Monday since it's an image and the scanner is at work) only mine is a bit silly. ;)
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[personal profile] elen_nare 2012-02-06 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
I love this! The Doctor's voice is perfect :)

[identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I want to say "lovely" but I suspect that is probably the last descriptor the Doctor would use. Excellent ouchiness!

[identity profile] pennywish.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
This is charmingly haunting in the same way the show is at its best. Thanks for sharing!