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clarasteam ([personal profile] clarasteam) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2017-02-27 10:12 pm

Sleepless: Fairy Tale: Poem: The End of Sleep

Title: The End of Sleep
Fandom: Fairy tales
Length: 60
Content notes: no warnings apply
Summary: What wakes her?
Author note: could be read as an answer to Au bois dormant, but I think it works on its own.



What wakes her? Not a lover’s kiss,
a voice or a footstep. Nothing stirs
in the silent courtyard, nothing has
for a hundred years. It’s time,
Beauty, time to get up. That hedge of briar
gnarled thick with age, shutting out the light,
can’t keep you in. Sharpen your axe:
cut away, cut through. Make a path to the world.


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[personal profile] smallhobbit 2017-02-27 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I do like this. The idea Beauty can be responsible for her own future.
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[personal profile] dariaw 2017-03-02 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
This is great - I love Sleeping Beauty as a badass cutting her way out with the axe. And I love the way you make the story relate to all of us metaphorically (if that's what you were intending?)