ysobel: (Default)
masquerading as a man with a reason ([personal profile] ysobel) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2012-03-22 02:38 pm

Stages Challenge: Sherlock: Fanfic (poetry): Reactions

Title: Reactions
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Rating: Teen
Length: a touch over 100 words
Spoiler: through Reichenbach (end of season 2)
Content notes: Direct fallout from canon, specifically (skip) suicide/death and resultant grief
Author notes: Erm. Sorry it isn't more cheerful? *wry grin*
Summary: How things should be, and how things are.



This is how
(some people think)
John should be reacting:

denial, anger, bargaining, depression, acceptance

and then
(some people think)
he should move on

get over it

forget

...

(people are idiots,
he imagines Sherlock saying)

...

This is how
(he thinks)
Sherlock thinks he should react:

observation, analysis, logic

and then
(Sherlock would think)
he would understand

or at least

accept

...

(if only Sherlock were here
to tell him these things--
not with words
but with a glance, a lifted eyebrow,
a flicker of elegant fingers--

if, if, if)

...

This is how
(he knows)
he is reacting:

like an airplane
with one wing gone, spinning out of control
trailing smoke

and then
(someday; not yet)
hitting the ground

aerye: (Default)

[personal profile] aerye 2012-03-22 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
OUCH.

Very nice. ::g::
merryghoul: road (sherlock moriarty)

[personal profile] merryghoul 2012-03-22 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
An angsty poem! Was not expecting this at all. Well done.
riceishere: (Default)

[personal profile] riceishere 2012-03-23 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh John :(
kass: Sherlock and John. (Sherlock)

[personal profile] kass 2012-03-27 01:00 pm (UTC)(link)
The last section of this is really powerful. "like an airplane / with one wing gone, spinning out of control / trailing smoke" -- beautiful.
malnpudl: (Default)

[personal profile] malnpudl 2012-03-30 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that hurt good.
echan: rainbow arch supernova remnant (Default)

[personal profile] echan 2012-04-22 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
Oo, I liked this!
jesse_the_k: Those words with glammed-up Alan Cummings (Drama queen)

[personal profile] jesse_the_k 2012-04-22 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Whaaaa. *sob* But with artistry! Thanks.