mergatrude: (writing - poetry)
mergatrude ([personal profile] mergatrude) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2020-11-20 11:55 am
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Original: Poetry: Relief

Title: Relief
Fandom: Original
Rating: G
Length: short
Content notes: a haiku
Author notes: unbeta-ed


the night breeze arrives
carrying the scent of jasmine
through my screen door
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china_shop: Yellow cartoon sloth hanging from a blue branch, above the word 'love'. (Love sloth)

[personal profile] china_shop 2020-11-20 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I love this -- especially the screen door, which presumably keeps out a bunch of things you don't want, while letting in the jasmine scent. It feels softly optimistic. *pats screen door approvingly*
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[personal profile] mergatrude 2020-11-20 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yes, that's exactly it. <3
yarnofariadne: morticia addams from the sitcom sitting in a chair (film: don't you wanna feel my bones)

[personal profile] yarnofariadne 2020-11-20 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely! ♥
mergatrude: a skein, a ball and a swatch of home spun and dyed blue yarn (Default)

[personal profile] mergatrude 2020-11-20 10:05 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)
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