Original: Poetry: Communication

[thewhitelily]

Title: Communication
Fandom: Original
Length: 22 lines
Summary: Working as a team doesn't always go smoothly

 

This goes here and that goes there
I’ll break it down for you
No, this one there; that over there
I said that last time too
That’s not the way I want it done
I told you what to do
Just do it right, no need to fight
It clearly looks askew
How can’t you see that it’s all wrong?
Don’t you have eyes to view?
Okay: just stop. I don’t need help
Please do not misconstrue
I’m not too picky, but it seems
You haven’t got a clue
I’ve done it now, just look at that
I’ve somehow made it through!
Oh, I see now. That’s what you meant
Perhaps we should review
There we go, it’s better now
That we could both redo
We make a rather lovely team
I’m glad you’re here: thank you.

Comments

[smallhobbit]

And not only the words, but I can visualise a lot of handwaving going into this poem.