LOL That last line really pulls it together on a much lighter note, and I love your description of Ryo laying there bonelessly in the first. You know I'm often comparing these two to things J and I have been through, but this is first part with Dee suddenly being scared Ryo's having second thoughts and not liking that he's so vulnerable still... For a change, Dee is totally me on that aspect.

The boys are adorable together as well, and your adjectives and dialogue really bring it all together! Fabulous job, hon, as always!